Thursday, April 14, 2011




ये संग्दिलों की दुनिया है,


ज़रा संभल के चलना ग़ालिब,


यहाँ पलकों पे बिठाया जाता है,


नज़रों से गिराने के लिए.....!!!

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

wah wah....
~Pearl...

संजय भास्कर said...

बहुत सुंदर और उत्तम भाव लिए हुए.... खूबसूरत रचना......

Raj said...

Palak....

Sach kahu? jindgi ki hakikat ko aapne "chand" sabdo mein bahut hi khubi se bayaan kiya hai....

Aaap ke is andaaz ko mera salaam...

raaaj said...

I am impressed with your assertion "...yahan palakon pe bithaya jata hai......nazaron se girane k liye....."...impressed me
very much.Your poem is critically very good.Your skill is for
poetry is commendable.

Anonymous said...

hmm...kya kahu..

suri said...

no word can express my feeling for your each line...GOD bless You dear. and its our honour that u had given us such a beautiful chance to read your feelings and creations. Thanks a Lot palak.

suri said...

thanks a lot for sharing such a nice feelings..

suri said...

good night palak...